My poem. My life is Hell.?

well I liked the idea of wanting to go back on your mistake however some of the words used to rhyme were rather simple. The rhyming, in my opinion, took away from the powerful words available for you to use. Also the poem ended to quickly, it did not have enough about her wanting to rejoin society. 3/5 for the poem but 5/5 for the idea. great work and keep it up